1st July 2022
You will be somewhat bemused to know that this blog has featured in a style-guide for writing.
Yes, I know.
But it is true:
It would appear that this blog is regarded as having a distinctive style – and that the distinctive style is, in turn, regarded as being helpful to those interested in the topics covered by this blog.
So, on this Friday afternoon – as I put together some longer pieces for next week – I thought it may interest some of you for me to write something about why this blog has this distinctive (that is, peculiar) style.
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The main reason I write in one-sentence paragraphs on this blog is because it suits me – for it helps me organise and then express my thoughts.
With a one-sentence paragraph there is no hiding place for the author.
Either the one-sentence paragraph puts forward a worthwhile proposition or it does not.
With longer paragraphs – with multiple clauses and sentences – there is scope for waffle, inexactness, and evasion.
And so one-sentence paragraphs are a means of keeping an author sharp – they are a discipline.
Even if nobody read this blog – and one happy day constitutional law may again be so dull that nobody will read blogs about law and policy – I would still write in this style on this blog.
That may well be selfish, but it is true.
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And just as there is no hiding place in each one-sentence paragraph this also means there is no hiding place in a sequence of one-sentence paragraphs.
If there is a fault in the reasoning or the evidence, it will stand out.
The weakness in the chain will be evident – glaringly so.
This again helps me as a writer, but it also helps you as a reader.
If I make a mistake in my reasoning or with my evidence, you can quickly work out where I have gone astray.
You can either then dismiss the point I am seeking to convey or engage in the comments below (or on Twitter).
And so if my propositions are weak and/or my observations and illustrations banal and/or my arguments unsound, you will at least know where the fault is.
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Another advantage of short paragraphs – one-sentence or not – is that they are easier to read on the screen.
They are – for want of a better word – scrollable.
A reader may read five successive short paragraphs, but he or she may be put off from reading the same sentences in one long paragraph.
This is often not the case when reading from physical pages, but when you are reading from computer screen and other electronic devices, short crisp paragraphs are often more readable.
And this is especially helpful when there is a lot of ‘white space’ – and thanks to the generosity of my Patreon and Paypal supporters, this blog has not – yet – resorted to commercial advertising to blight the nice white space surrounding the words.
For to misquote a clever philosopher: there should be nothing outside the text.
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Another reason why I write like this is that I was brought up in tabloid-reading households.
You may not like such newspapers – and you may prefer broadsheets with their correspondingly broad passages.
But writing brisk short sentences about current affairs is a skill in and of itself, and for most of my childhood that is how I read both news and comment.
(The veteran newspaperman Neil Wallis once told me he had guessed from my blogging that I had been brought up in a tabloid-reading household, and he was right.)
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So there are advantages of blogging in this way, both for the author and for the readers.
But.
It is not the ‘right’ way.
And this is because there is no ‘right’ way.
There are instead ways of blogging that work for both writers and readers – and there are ways that do not.
Some of the gods of British blogging – such as Chris Grey on Brexit and Lawrence Freedman on strategy and war – provide highly readable, compelling blogs with detailed multi-sentence paragraphs.
As did the greatest of all British legal bloggers, the late Sir Henry Brooke – who, wonderfully, came to blogging after being a court of appeal judge.
His blog – which is thankfully still online years after his death – is a must-read for anyone interested in the law.
So there are a number of ways of blogging.
It all comes down to what suits the writer, and to what suits the readers (if any).
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But.
There are disadvantages of this blog’s approach.
Some propositions are complex and so require more than can be packed into one sentence.
You then get odd-looking long sentences that try so hard to keep everything in one sentence – but they are obviously contrived, and they are as awkward to read as they are awkward to write, and so should never have been started in the first place; and they often resort to sub-clauses just to keep to the somewhat artificial one-sentence rule.
Such sentences should be avoided.
As Orwell averred after offering his rules for good political writing:
“Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.”
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So the style of this blog is adopted mainly for the selfish reason that it helps me to think clearly and to organise and express those thoughts.
And if blogging in multi-sentence paragraphs helped me do the same, then I would blog like that instead.
One-sentence paragraphs are therefore not a model, but just a technique.
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Overall, the best guide to good writing is that it is not about the writing, but about the thinking.
If you think clearly, you will tend to write (and speak) clearly.
And if you do not think clearly, then no style-guide will help you.
For, as the techies say: garbage in, garbage out.
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